THE RISE OF DIVINE CHEF

So far I like this and I'm writing a story kinda similar but thats not the reason I like it I like the concept like him being tired of being the villain although I want to know what happens next...please continue this story...Ill rerate this once the number of chapters get higher but...very interesting first chapter??

Its bad. the worst points are How OP the MC is eventhough hes only been cultivating for ca. 30 with the system and is sonning all other people. Then the translation is horrible as well.

No wonder the story felt somewhat familiar. It's turn out that I already read the manhua version for this novel.If you by chance found this page, that means you are fated to read this God-made novel

Such a nice and interesting story l must say.... The world that author has tried to create is hella good.....The concept of video game looks very unique to me and never read these kind of books before so it attracts me the most and now really enjoyed reading it... The writting style of author is also really great l must say.... Keep it up author...

then someone passed by and...............…

"Mana is a innate characteristics of a human body and cannot be altered using any otherworldly instruments or magical artifacts or even godly artifacts."