The Person I'm Flirting with Online Is My Direct Boss (High H) - Reviews

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nigahiga

"I was one of those young men back then, joined the war reading the poems of a certain poetess completely convinced that it will bring a lot of glory and ladies to me when I will tell them about being in the war,It did nothing but give me scars for my life both mental and physical. The sights that you see during the war, these young guys can't imagine it right now but once they see it they will never forget it.You enlisted? "

I was about to go  when someone caught my attention.A girl who cries hugging her pillow. She's pale and thin thou you can still see the big humps in her tummy. She's Aly the teen age girl who was about to give birth next month. She's still crying and hating herself. she doesn't need to tell her story to make me understand her feels. As I always see her I can say I feel knife like it stab me inside my heart. She always cry when she can't sleep because of thinking too much, depression tries to invade her again into her soul.I walk to her and slowly touches her long brown  hair her cries slowly fading but I know she's still awake and not okay. she's fragile but not weak she's quite strong but afraid, She had this soft and innocent look adorable and lovely that's the right word to describe her.

Rias:"Aku Menolak

Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further

considering that this review is for the reward I think that I owe you 5 stars

The story grabs attention quickly; it’s super well-organized and easy to read, without getting caught up in unnecessary details. The descriptions are clear, which keeps the flow going smoothly—perfect if you like a narrative that gets straight to the point.As a tip, I’d suggest adding a bit more emotion to the characters so readers can connect better with what they’re feeling and thinking; it’d make things feel more personal. One more thing: try breaking up some of the longer paragraphs to keep the reading light and easy. With those tweaks, the story and characters will definitely hit closer to home.Hope it helps!

Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further

Amazing! The perfect amount of suspense, magic, and adventure. Never too wordy, it's straight to the point that makes it easy to understand the story's world and will keep you up all night and day reading more!

Great story, keep up the good work.And please don't drop this story, it's really good.