The perfect life - Reviews

[Void Presence- allows user to to become immaterial, cannot be seen, or interacted with

Michael snickered saying, "What's wrong? Why are you scared me? Is it because you've done something wrong? I can fire you right on the spot if you don't tell me NOW!" His expression suddenly changed.

"Congratulations third master and miss on delivering a healthy boy"

He has nearly enough experience to level up again, which he found to be pretty quick. It was only 3 hours since he leveled up last, so he is wondering why it is so easy to level up. Is it because it is not a game now? He fell asleep while wondering about this.

My world's on fire, how about yours?

Keep on doing the good work author??good stuff ?? the matches exciting  and they appear pretty  good in mind and it's engaging. Impatiently awaiting your next update?

Mc character development was insane the quality is good the fights were detail and fun to read,but the most important is backstory and world building

Please give a feedback or a rating for this novel I wrote, I just hope ya’ll like it, I’m just trying out my creative writing skills and I just wanna make this story simple and drama.