The Note That Undressed Me - Reviews

"You don't know? We're all commoners but we at least in the know! That's Mannie, 3rd in the elite class and a big bully. He looks for trouble any chance he gets and gets away with it because he is from the 3rd strongest Family in Murk City. I can bet that guy did nothing wrong but still got picked on" the other explained.

            ANNA'S POV

-Some Later-

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

I like your story ..keep it up...Fell proud to your brother

Good novelKeeps the reader on the edge.Nobody saw the Vael dying on the fifth chapter.System feels natural part of the story instead of over explanation.