The Narrow-Eyed Villain of the Demon Academy

I like the story cant wait for the update

Начало веселое :)

This story is very interesting, why isn't the story popular

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brother are you alright

The protagonist, who is the author of the novel, holds the powerful OP (Overpowered Protagonist) status as the main character in his story. However, tired of the conventional hero triumph, he decides to leave the human world's six great families and seek refuge in the demon realm. Concealing his identity as the last surviving descendant of a half-demon family responsible for the previous war between humans and demons, he enrolls in a demon academy, where he serves as an escort for a lady seeking revenge for her mother's death.

The plot initially progresses well, with a compelling mix of identity concealment and character growth. The MC grapples with the imbalance of his novel's perspective, often from the heroes' point of view. However, there are issues that arise:

1. The pacing slows down significantly after about 100 chapters, with some sections feeling like filler content. Excessive descriptions拖慢了故事的节奏, despite spanning 180 chapters, as the protagonist停滞不前, stuck on a single significant event.

2. One of the female leads, reminiscent of a whiny and overly caring character like Hinata, becomes a source of annoyance. I found myself skipping her scenes entirely.

3. Despite the MC's intention to hide his true abilities, it seems implausible that he has managed to maintain this facade effectively.

In summary, while the initial setup offers intrigue, the story loses momentum and struggles with character dynamics, particularly with one of the heroines, which affects the reader's engagement.