I don't like this hypocrat mc............................................................................................................................................
The story is about a reincarnated boy from earth in a futuristic world with beast taming. Mc finds a system that is like a hyperbolic time chamber but it is another world.
The story seems to be good but the characters seem to be 1 dimensional but the most off putting thing is the grammar. The grammar is so bad that it seems the author doesn't know MC's main gender.
Author if you have seen this please fix Mc's gender.
story seems interesting, but generic story, world mutates humans are useless besides being slave drivers, but ehh, probably one of the best amongst this pile of garbage with a few grains of gold
This reads like a heavily edited MTL. Same issues with genders and names that all the new stories have been having lately. Overall dont waste your time on this because it's......
Don't be fooled by the 4 &5 stars reviews.
The story is trash, full of plotholes for the sake of plot, 0 proofread, its worse than the usual trial read.
Don't waste your braincells on this.
There are too many grammatical mistakes you should edit them properly Initiation is already problematic making main characters she when it should be he for other things we will see how author reacts to comments and the remedies he makes
need update on this novel
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