THE MISSING SECRET - Reviews

- "I can't believe it!"- said Maz Kanata who just as Leia opened her eyes wide in disbelief.

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For the entire week,  Yuri was subjected to bullying from Watanabe and his minions. With each passing day,  the Prince's desk got worse, and his chairs were either missing or partially broken.  Still,  Yuri remained calm, and tried his best to not massacre the entire class.

"Alright, I suppose y' wouldn't take my word for it, so I got to let the devil deliver the message herself. Look in here" he said, pointing to a pool of water on the ground. "Don't worry, y' aren't going to see anything just yet." Casious, feeling annoyed at being led by the nose by his grandpa, looked down at the pool with reservation. "There, everything normal so far?" his grandpa asked. "Yeah" He said with some confusion.

"9000. You tricked me, so you need to pay me an extra thousand."

"Cool."

Brycen, seeing the soup on the floor and the man's clothes while his glares were directed at the sitting woman, could understand what happened. He proposed for the man to come to the toilet with him, other pants would be offered. Before going, he apologized in the name of the restaurant for the inconvenience and tried asking if someone else was stained, his gaze on the sitting woman.

And Ruo Yan, from the beginning of his speech, remained petrified, unable to process what she had just heard.  

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

4. Human half genius (Extremly

I really like the creativity of this novel. I enjoy reading the different trails and the thought that went into every detail. But, I wish that the author would make a better effort to clean up and polish his work so that what they have imagined is clearly conveyed through the effective use of Grammer and vocabulary. This is my personal opinion, but maybe the author should focus on the advancement of the story, rather than spending 2 to 3 chapters explaining intimate nights. I just feel that the mature scenes don't need that much detail, and maybe you could shorten it down so that we can get back into the story and enjoy the book. There are more ways to show romance than in the bedroom. Other than that, great detail and good luck on the future chapters.

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