The Man of Soul

Here we are back at Sarthak's novel.

So... The latest few chapters have not been my cup of tea. By that, I mean that the whole "Lucifer" thing. Nonetheless, the next few chapters are a tad interesting.

They expanded more on the lore and had development. Sarthak clearly likes his world building. Morgan's getting weirder, but at least Glen's there. I suggest the author add some moments of introspection. The more he writes, the somewhat better his skills become. That's all I'm gonna say for now.

After reading more chapters since our first review, it's safe to say things have taken an interesting change of pace.

So, Morgan's ability to separate his soul seems to tell me that he's going to be extremely difficult to take down. That's not a negative thing. I just hope Sarthak knows about adaptability. The dialogue between characters isn't half bad, especially when it involves the MC.

I feel like that narrative's a tad brisk and some scenes are melodramatic. There's no particular wronging in this, though, since the story's still in its initial stages. Like, Sarthak's world-building is commendable.

Couldn't help but notice that his writing gets better with each new chapter released. It's engaging enough, and he delivers some solid descriptions for the action scenes. Makes the dialogue flow naturally.

P.S. If I see the name "Cassius" one more time in a book, I'm closing it.

Being familiar with Sarthak's work, I find Morgan's ability fascinating. That "notorious criminal" should help his character development. The MC's office-worker vibes also makes him a tad relatable for some.

While the premise is intriguing, there is a lot of melodrama. However, this review was posted with only two chapters. I'm sure more depth will be added as the series progresses.

A promising start.

Do not start reading these books. rip off of money. Having to wait for chapters. Neverending story.