The Magical Blacksmith - Reviews

Fantastically ORIGINAL! A refreshing blow(=read) ; amongst others it is damn difficult and hard to stand out...

Least of all be original and unique WHEN in a "theme" or "genre" ,- that has been all but exhausted!

But you (author) and this book stand out 99MM on originality of USEAGE of background materials and your universe "FILL stuff" so to say. NOT that it is fill meant in the normal way of cource.

I originally began on my own novel in 1996... A mix of Gibson, Sterling and Dean  Koontz ; in "Linda and Valentine" / "Valeria n and the city of 10.000 planets" setting.

And I find yours to be both EQUALLY as more so versatile in its incorporation of all elements and fundamentals as characters  and background as "flavour text" describitions of situations and environment and fellings as emotions :-)

Better be overgeared .  Its a proper gaming novel instead  i would say story could be better.








You may like it for begginer

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I can see that this is happening like a original cultivate novel where some thing bad or trade happens and they get something good like a system or a artifact that can change there life. First of all why can't the parents not died it almost happens on every single novel so the Main character can be independent.

enjoyed the story so far hope to get the rest of the story but who knows what will happen...all we can do is wait for the results but I'm hopeful

I have read up to chapter 25 so I can't say for the whole novel if it went better. The novel is completed with only 450 chapters. The novel just isn't that interesting enough for me to waste my time to read that much chapters. This is the main problem with this novel. It is tiresome to read which leads to to the audience tired to invest time in reading this novel. There is also the common problem with the dialogues. The medium of the novel is the writing. We can't see how they talk but can only imagine it with how the author writes. Having overreaction and unrealistic dialogues makes the characters in the novel dumber and makes you imagine that they have screw loose. It tried to be comedic but just failed. This won't gather enough readers to make it viable to translate especially with how much chapters it only have.