The Luna's Rebirth: A Vow of Power and Betrayal - Reviews

I think its an amazing story from the mc to the world building. The writing quality isn't too bad but too not good either and i hope the author doesn't drop it.

i hope this will get picked already read the 20 chapter and it's good for me .                                                     .                              .

meh, Grammer could use help. The titles even have issues. Jumps around, tried to make good jokes but doesn't translate at all and things sometimes are kinda forgot or not followed up on. like a monster is killed for level up but he does level up or he is suddenly level 10 after alot of travel filler.

The author wrote a great book that takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions, the grammar is good(I know shocking for this website), and the story telling is great. The MC, Jack, is relatable and likable. Even if a couple million die. It is an enjoyable read and I would honestly recommend the author publishing a full book.

It's a good read if you're looking for something quick to read but turning off your brain is a must before delving into this.But I'm sure despite the black holes that are coming left and right, you can still have a chance on patching them up

Wei Guiyin ran away as fast as she could until she arrived at the mansion's door. It was opened by the workers and rows of butlers as maids were waiting.

*.....You motherf-*

"Never" Lucas said while ignoring the narcistic Benjamin.

(Dragneel) "What did it look like?"

-Why would you want that? (looks at something in his book)Was there a reaso... Oohh! Now I get it. Ok. Have it your way. A man needs to be with his girlfriend.

No norte havia visão para o mar, e havia três biomas no território o bioma de floresta o de deserto e o de gelo e deserto são muito menores se comparado ao da floresta e ficam mais isolados para o sudoeste.

Li Jinkin and Rajeev had fought tooth and nail for the Siachen glacier. India and China has been fighting for it for the past nine years. Control of the Siachen would effectively give China control of the Karakkoram pass giving them a virtual free pass into India.