Hey Author, because you're new, how about taking notes of certain aspects to improve in and asking us about what should be improved on, so we support you more. Take the critic from Erezoth for example that may seem harsh, but if you truly listen to it and take your time off after The first Volume and improve on the story that way, it truly would turn out a banger with Volume 2 , so cheer up and take advice to improve, nobody's perfect from the start so I wish you all the best :] ?
