The comedy really got it, I laughed it out. Especially when Rifai was buying a television, suddenly Daylon came and made it messy, even to the point of entering the police station
Story development is ok paced. The MC is actually developing his skills rather than being born or reincarnated as OP, and the MC isn't a simp so it doesn't feel like a harem (even though it is one) lol
I cant wait to continue with the next chapter, I hope and hope the little boy survives. I will recommend this novel for my friends because it's a new story and the story line is far much different than other stories. More ink to your pen writer
Soon enough, gunney Johan started assigning everyone tasks to complete, like setting up anti-aircraft emplacements or trench digging. Trace, as the newbie, drew a short straw and was assigned to be the "lookout