You are doing great with the story.... nothing much to say . Just that it feels like mc s not so powerful and I think you should start giving him powers . ...... PLEASE DON'T DROP (as many people with good interesting plot leave the story hanging.)
Fiesty female lead like my dear author! The closing of the first chapter just says it all! Ready for another wild ride and adventure. I trust my instincts of a new experience with this author. Let’s see the magic take form!❤️❤️