I would recommend author of this story attemtp writing this story again after growing up a little bit, cause it really looks like kid writing doctors degree philosophy research after reading one from internet. The mc has no logic in his actions. I would expect some expert style moveset from mc that can play around with police by refueling his bike on high speed and shooting down a copter easily but then he acts like 8 year old moron (kids act more logical than this mc). Out of logic parts is about whom adress his hatred, not understanding the "will", the essence and magic stuff, even blue burger, if his ancestors was from earth and u don't get blue bread from earth's wheat. U could just find tons of out of logic parts in every chapter
