The Last Sunset in Jakarta - Reviews

[PER+1]

And to that she rose and kissed him. And after a few seconds of hesitation, he kissed her back, with all his might.

Suddenly Braxton's tone was a lot less casual. "Seems we might have to have another little chat with our friend."

Of course, Ren wouldn't feel unhappy. From her, he felt energy fluctuations almost as strong as that of the elder! It didn't take a genius to associate 'the miss' who the maid spoke about and her. She was definitely the master of this house and also, his savior.

The author pat his own back on this one. ?So far I have only read it to chapter 57 and I am not impress. I have a lot of patience with grammatical error and mispelling because I know that this is translated on a language that is not local to the author but my man, if you are shooting to make money on a language that is not familiar to you at least use a google to check your grammar. The errors are so blatant that it will drive you nuts! One more thing, I thought asian are good at math? WHY does the calculations on your novel so out of whack?! If you dont know how to add just make it vauge amount like aprroximately, or almost or better yet just dont add anymore. You got the nerve to grade your own work 5 star? Seriously? Fix your errors then I will definitely agree with you. Your stories carry a great potential to become something great but you need to have consistency with your grammars, character persona, and dont do math if you’re not good at it.