The Last Primordials - Reviews

Setelah pernikahan usai, mereka  telah pergi ke kamar masing-masing karna ke lelahan, begitu juga Said dan Tuti, telah memasuki kamar mereka.

Ben loved  no one exept himself. He was a schemer, he played with people and when he can't anymore he killed them, only Rachel and Melody knew this side of Ben.

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Mythic/Mythical

good story and great plot, I like how you did the characters in the first few chapters! keep it up!

The story is interesting, being action-packed from the get go. The characters face a different type of apocalypse, which is a nice welcome because nobody said that the apocalypse had to only involve zombies, right?  There are some grammatical errors and the flow of the story is good. There were some areas that got me confused, but it's a fictional story lol. But on a serious note, I don't think it was wise to make a whole lot of noise when the enemy is most likely close by. Regardless of my review, go read the story and see if you like it.

the writing is okay..but almost looked like chatgpt.characters are all npcs cardboard cutouts or utter trashwe get mc who transmigrated after an emotional stroke..then without any explanation proceeds to workout based on dyi swordsmanship recommended by a grandma who is never mention3d again while author proceeds to write about random shit. like side character marriage.,what they ate or wore for marriage and even smut or atleast attempt.. coz I never felt so celibate reading an r18 chapter.then mc returns after a jap isekai adventure where he gets a daughter for no apparent reason...to return to his family for revenge..which is to be the top loyal dog and thug for the familyso far no powersystem or world building explained except for random video game like lore told by npcs in a npc fashionread if u r tired with life and need anger or frustration as motivation

This is a very nice book, it is very well written, my recommendation, it is a must read.

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Well, I think it's okay, only read when free, and don't have anything to read again