The Last Akaki - Reviews

There was a flash of surprise before a scowl settled on her face, as though she was greatly offended the man she slept with actually had a partner; an insult to her dignity. The woman brushed her wet hair back from her eyes and engaged in a staring contest with Erin.

she was looking for a new beginning new start. Just waiting will not give her that but she is ready to struggle hard and gain what was taken from her.

Wait a minute.... #108963...doesn't this mean that lame creature named "God" that she had just met wasn't the first one of his kind...

"But the caster of the spell and the secret keeper cannot be the same! How did you bypass the restriction, sir?" Micasa asked.

Melody: Oh they're actually alive... Ahem... And thus our story continues to be..

"It's not the first time," Ren moaned as he felt himself sitting on Shinobu's hardened member. "I don't mind."

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"Let's stay," Mary answered for me, but of course Eloisa could not hear.

Goba looks glad about that he had a chance to get this, but wouldn't a month of something telling you about anything at all drive you crazy? Maybe it's just because Goba has such a strong mind! He's amazing.

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

I don’t have much to say at the moment. Will be updating this at chapter 50. It is quite a nice novel this far. It could use someone peer reading and helping fix minor mistakes, but otherwise its got potential. A major recommendation is to put a ranking system. Though this might not work depending on how the systems align across planets. If you do put recommend a spoiler at the top of said info page.:)