The Immortal's Trusting God - Reviews

If it wasn't thanks to momentum I would have been stunned still, instead I forget to put my next foot forward and end up driving the screwdriver into the creatures arm. The smell of its flesh and the sound of tearing, searing an image into my mind that I'd much rather forget. The creature lets out a howl of anger and the multitool makes the sound of metal tearing.

-Thirty Minutes Later:-

I look around for somewhere to seat and noticed that most were already taken. I then spotted a free one but it was beside a hooded guy. He was wearing earphones and was staring out the window, with a vermillion notebook laying on his lap. Despite his face mostly being covered up by his hoodie, his pale skin and a strand of his raven hair still stood out.

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You'll never know if you don't go

Only shooting stars break the mold

But the meteor men beg to differ

I took my phone out of my pocket and was about to call Seokjin-hyung but then it began ringing.

Bruce, who'd been looking down at Lila's picture, muttered in thought, "They don't need to be protected. They need toevolve." Looking up to the group, he clarified, "Ultron's going to evolve."

This is a great storyline, the writer is really good,  almost at the edge of the novel ?. More comments incoming?

Chapters are getting better... Keep writing please