I enkoyed the story, the character is likable and the development and tension is good. Not that it is a bad thing, but based on certain patterns , it seems sometimes very obvious the chapters have been edited by a software that starts with G and end T. But it still feels like the story is an original work. I don’t see as checking your grammar with software like that a problem .I would personally prefer some larger moments of breathing between tension. Sometimes it gives vibes of a battle series. One thing after another with no room to sit back and take it all in.I recommend it.
