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The Grand Dungeon
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My smile stiffened when I heard his question. "Now what made you say that?."
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Thankfully, Doctor Patrick did not stir even though Arthur thought the Jade Rabbit was being incredibly loud. The mortar and pestle glowed a pearly white while the rabbit worked on it. The glow was much stronger than when Doctor Patrick was using it. It appeared like the man did not really unlock the mortar and pestle's full potential.
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"Tsk, be grateful, kid. I completed your whole look. With only the coat, you would look like an idiot trying to look cool. Now, you can wear it without embarrassing yourself. Everything was done respecting all the specifics. Elegance, practicality and endurance. For the man wants to show his class, even on the battlefield. Don't worry, the extra's on the house."
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"Lee Jae-yong has betrayed me."
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Alex stopped and stared at him for a few seconds before continuing walking. "Hey, hey, why are you walking without me? Don't you want to know more? Like why I'm here?" Sapphire said. Alex, still walking, replied "That's such a lie. You must've heard all of this from your previous Fuser that abandoned you. Plus, even if it was true, why should I bother with how you came here and all that jazz. It's your story and, frankly, it's probably about history, which is the subject that I failed back at school". Hearing Alex's opinion on the matter, Sapphire gave up. It's true, he is the [System], but Alex just couldn't care less. Sapphire decided that if Alex changes his mind, he'll tell him. But, for now, he can continue believing it's a lie.
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She stopped swinging her sword for a sec and wipe the sweat on her forehead with a towel she prepared beforehand.
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"Kak makasih ya".
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[Such a brave lad... Haaaaaah, I wonder if I can paint myself worse with this. I hope not, I mean I haven't really look at myself in the mirror.]
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Emric: -He meets her grin with a small smile of his own-
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"Why's that?" Charles asked a bit perplexed. He had seen some of the other boys doing that but wasn't able to understand the reasoning.
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"I'm proud of you my Nina." Ping hold the girl and sways them from side to side, making the girl giggle cutely.
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interesting. nice writing really great...

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