The Godswar - Reviews

"Heh, buncha' dumb asses"The newspaper taunted.

The contents of the message were different from others, and made James feel tempted. Brazen was trying to recruit James as a personal aid, out of the Guild's hands. He was to create a special unit of players, to guide them and to get the players used to the game's mechanics. It even offered a big pay check, one that would make white collar workers waver when they saw it.

Occupation: WarriortRank: Low-order Warrior's apprentice (0%)

The wolf witnessing the horrific scene tried to flee for his life only to be impaled by the broken tusk which Gine picked up and threw like a spear into the throat of the wolf leaving it unable to let out its last howl.

Jasmine subiu em uma das primeiras árvores que viu e ficou em cima dela olhando para as estrelas, "Talvez o melhor seja isso, Thomas é uma boa pessoa, ele pode ajudar a minha irmã a melhorar e até mesmo ajudar meu pai no reino, eu estou sendo egoísta querendo ele só para mim" Pensou a menina tristemente.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

"Something tells me that excitement isn't meant for Mr. And Mrs. Heath." Her father mumbled.

Nice work author keep it up and keep uploading ❤️?

I have only problem with one thing and that is your strong hold or your foundation is not strong on your story everything else is really good I mean really good it's just you are taking your story in fast way that's also good thing but you are not developing your main characters feeling not telling us how he feels because if you want to make your correct likeable by everybody you have to show some kind of emotions like anger soup your tea complex and defeating his own emotion by some kind of incident everything, this way he can understand and we can understand that he is developing in the story even though he has power he should understand or you should make us feel that is this character is real in our imagination and the story by showing us or letting us feel his emotion bye elaborating every small details if you can in his life that way you will make your story better even better than this is right now