Pros:
+ Characters are unique and interesting and the dialogue is witty as hell
+ Pacing is pretty well done, author doesn’t drag things on too much
+ Story is very original and the author does his best to steer away from cliches
Cons:
- Grammar and spelling are a bit off sometimes but not so bad to be unreadable, easily fixable with an editor
- Slow release schedule, I NEED MORE
- Chapters feel a bit short but maybe I’m a quick a reader?
- Not many POVs explored to expand on world building
Conclusion:
It’s a very nice read, can be mildly frustrating with some of the author’s grammar mistakes, especially if you’re a native english reader like me, but the author does correct his mistakes if you comment so it’s a good sign that he listens to feedback. As someone who has read A LOT of web novels, this ranks very high in my list of enjoyable reads since it is original and takes a unique take on the typical cultivation story. I hope this helps and have a wonderful day fellow reader! :)
Sincerely,
RobespierreK
