The Forsaken God King - Reviews

The Holy Protection ability is constant protection, it creates a layer in itself protecting from curs of the same level as the user (you can defend yourself from curses of rank 1)

Another man with the moustache laughed, "Or are you thinking of joining in the fun after we are done?"

"I wonder." I said as I decided to try that method to my spear.

Distracted by the call, the man didn't notice the small but discernible flash of light that shone brightly in the forest of trees, higher up in the mountain, lighting up it's surrounding for a short amount of time before quickly fading. By the time the man looked over, the light had already disappeared, along with one of their students.

When Zie Xin arrived in the imperial study's entrance, she took a deep breath and set her aura in her seductive yet bashful look. She kept her head down when the door opened. She entered in a graceful way and immediately kneeled to greet the emperor. "Greetings your majesty, the emperor." After her greetings, she slowly lifted her head while fluttering her eyelashes and showing her sweet bashful smile.

As of chapter 39:On the grammar front this fanfic is okay and I couldn't find any mistakes.On the plot side this fanfic progress okay and I didn't get bored while reading or found any plot hole. The characters themselves also feel alive and not mechanical or robotic. The harem and s*x is also not forced or illogical but flowed quite well.Overall, I will give this fanfic five stars

I'm on chapter 37 so far, but I'm still hook to the story. NICE :)