The Forsaken Destiny - Reviews

January 1, 2019 at 3 in the morning, the worst New Year's Day in my life. on New Year's Eve I got dinner shift at a fast-food fried chicken restaurant.

A bit of messy hair tied into a bun, a plain white shirt and pants, she entered a restaurant to apply for a job.

xZeechan are you ok and well? You haven't updated in a while

As I enter her room , I went to her bedroom and check if she is still lying but she's not there . I called her again , she didn't answered . I saw her things ; her bag , pokemon accessories , her clothes just on the bed . I recognize a picture of her with a man in coat , maybe this is her father .

I went and stood to face him, "Take off your shirt".

"And from there on a new system of organisation for the few remaining pure blood devils began, the evil pieces were started, the Evil Pieces were created by Ajuka Beelzebub using the crystals available in the Agreas Island to help replenish the number of Devils after the Great War which had caused the death of countless Devils.

The Nurseperson take me out from the introgation room. And he push me to walk front of him.

When passing through the family room, it seems my mother is watching a news program on 'OrbWatcher'.

"Michael are you still busy?" Gabriel asks politely while sticking her head through the door

I do think that the topic is really good however, there is to much useless information in every single chapter. All the time something  was stated shortly at the beginning but the author feels the need to explain that statement in more depth by using two or more paragraphs. Due to that so little happens in each chapter. I really like the story however i think the author should stop giving out so much useless info in a single chapter or increase the lenghts of the chapters