First and foremost, I extend heartfelt thanks to the translator for their dedication in bringing this novel to our understanding. Despite its intriguing premise, the book appears to have been crafted by a teenager, incorporating numerous clichés. It possesses potential, yet it falls short due to poor writing and glaring plot inconsistencies.
Upon comparing the translated and machine-translated versions, I believe the issue lies primarily with the author's inability to delve deeper into the story. Here are some notable plot holes:
1. There is no explanation for the protagonist's sudden ability to see ghosts; it comes out of nowhere.
2. Her fame prior to the reincarnation is cited as a reason for her prowess, but it feels forced.
3. The character description of the ML (male lead) as a hotshot entertainment company president, who'd eagerly re-claim the FL (female lead) after she pursued his nephew, lacks logical coherence, even within a fantastical context. Additionally, the ML is portrayed as a skilled secret agent in disguise.
While both the author and translator put in effort, I must advise those seeking quality storytelling to look elsewhere. This novel reads more like a youth-oriented work, and while I respect the positive ratings from others, it didn't meet my expectations. The promising foundation was marred by inadequate writing, and despite my initial interest, I couldn't continue past Chapter 15.