the forgotten man - Reviews

Good Luck!!!

Similar to when they entered the Soul Society, Ichigo and his friends found themselves once again being chased by the Kōtotsu. Ichigo did not quite understand what was going on. He had expected that since this was the official gate, they would have a peaceful journey back, not one where they were running for their lives and screaming like a bunch of banshees.

————flashback 6 years ago————

Aku cukup malu dibuatnya.tapi untunglah Ayah memutuskan sambungan.

(Malalaman na ba ni elsa na buhay pa ang isa nyang anak)

I shake my head and look down at my chest. It is caked with blood but all my wounds have been healed leaving only barely visible scars. In fact even my body looks a bit more masculine. "Mako what kind of potion did you use on me?" Mako began to fiddle with it's fingers "Uh... Mako not sure?" My eyes go wide "You mean to tell me you used a potion that you didn't know the effects of?!" Mako lowered it's head like a child being reprimanded

(Pov?)

"if I kill you, everyone will HAVE to respect me" he then tried to pull the trigger but the bullet stopped mid air, Ghost was enraged, He slowly walked to the kid, Earth shattering beneath his feet with every step "he then gave the kid a single glance and used his Gravity abilities without moving, forcing the boy to fall face first into the ground unable to move and he broke the boys legs and arms as well without moving, only using his gravity, the crowd started whispering again

He's king in introspecting me! So, I think there's no need of reading out this letter again. He behaves as if he did masters in psycology. He can understand what I will be thinking at a moment,just by looking at my gestures, facial expressions...etc. That is why I always pretend to be careful with him.

"It's okay to be afraid, to have weaknesses. Everyone has them." Even I had a weakness, my family and friends. But can't tell him that. I can understand him, I wouldn't want someone to see me weak either. He took a deep breath, "How come you don't have any?"

Hello I am the author and I have made the wise choice of giving myself a free 5 star review.

gonna rate it 4.0 stars for now.. the translation still needs some work, but it's getting better. like with the names and how who is actually talking kinda confuses the reader. but overall keep up the good work ?.