I found it difficult to continue reading further. The story lacks depth and purpose. The author attempts to depict the main character (MC) as composed and mature by constantly reminding us of her calm demeanor, but her actions contradict this. Upon realizing it was a misunderstanding, she refuses to give the love interest (ML) a chance to explain and hastily assumes the worst, even blocking his number. This behavior hardly aligns with maturity or composure.
Moreover, the MC's reactions are inconsistent. She becomes overly anxious about not being able to change her outfit for a dinner, struggles to justify herself to her mother, and fails to communicate her feelings to ML, which doesn't demonstrate maturity. Her interactions with her friends feel shallow and uninteresting, as they mainly discuss mundane topics without progression or substance. The author fails to provide vivid descriptions of the characters, such as their appearance, clothing style, or personalities, which is crucial for establishing a connection with them.
After 20 chapters, I still have no clear image of the MC's physical appearance or personal preferences. Despite her claimed love for art, there's no evidence of her engaging in any artistic activities. The author missed an opportunity to showcase her character through a scene of painting or expressing herself creatively.
The fact that the story takes place within a novel context feels irrelevant if the MC isn't invested in it. The MC's lack of concern raises questions about the reader's investment as well. The MC's parents, initially portrayed as caring and protective against arranged marriages, exhibit conflicting behavior with constant reminders and pressure about blind dates, almost treating their daughter as a means to impress others.
In summary, the story suffers from numerous flaws, lacking a genuine slice-of-life feel or emotional healing aspect. The promising premise is undermined by poor execution and a clear lack of storytelling effort. At its core, the narrative feels hollow and unfulfilling.