The Fearless Princess (Forgotten Royals) - Reviews

"Sepertinya aku sudah tidak mampu menahannya lagi." ucapnya dan tak menundanya lagi. Ia langsung bergerak cepat, melumat lembut bibir itu hingga jantung seakan berhenti berdetak. Bernafas pun terlupakan. Ciuman itu terus berlangsung hingga setetes air mata menyadarkan Sehun. Gadis itu menangis dan air matanya menyentuh pipi pria itu. Sehun langsung menyudahi ciuman itu. "waeyo?" tanya Sehun panik dengan deru nafasnya yang tertinggal.

Heya,Loving the story! If you don't mind me trying to edit the chapters, although they're brilliant already, I've made a Google Doc, and if you could pass me your email, or perhaps a disposable one, I can correct any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes, should I find any. Up to you, of course.- A Wanderer.

"You look amazing." Her Mom's voice spook from behind. Jennie glance at her mother through the mirror and relaxed, letting out a breath.

"Let's say I'm old exhausted lady. Please. I will be really thankful." he was suspicious.

"And now please leave us Nurseperson ...." The Doctor grinning at me and make me shocked.