Very poetic at the beginning, but poetry confuses me sometimes. The wording in their relationship is confusing at times cause in chap 1 it sounds like their strangers/one-sided love, then in chap 2 it sounds like their estranged lovers, then in 3 it’s back to one/sided love.So far character descriptions aren’t really present, but I haven’t read too far and the main plot is still kinda being set, so forgiven. Good luck, and nice start.
