I enjoyed reading this novel as the writer's proficiency in the language is very good. For some of the novels I have read, it confused me as the use of pronouns is wrong
Elfs with the help of ghouls, holy trolls and centaurs had a upper hand in the battle. Ghouls were making the vampires weaker, elfs were holding the front line of defense with the centaurs attacking with there long spears and long bows. Holy trolls were purifying the vampires that were on their last breath. This was well thought battle plan where vampires were suppressed by numbers, strength and strategy.
"Bukankah aku sudah mengatakannya." menggenggam tangan Yoona. Mereka mulai melewati derasnya hujan dengan santai. Saling perpegangan."karena aku mencintaimu." Yoona mengehentikan langkahnya. Sehun sedikit terperanjat ketika melihat air mata mengalir di wajah isterinya itu. "wae geure?"
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