The Enemy of the World By Leonel Caldela/ Edited MTL - Reviews

Hello good sir I was scrolling through your novel and I could not help but see the potential in it... So I was wondering if you would like a part time native English speaker to help you edit your work

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pretty good read. I could see this being developed into a manga

So far, I am on chapter 60 and I've quite enjoyed it. What has keep me invested is the various mythology elements. I love the world building so far!! Not many compliants, just a few personal very small pet peeves this story ticks. I wish there was more time given too see character interactions and general development. For example, I would really like to see more development /details into the crafting abilities the protagonist has. It's been pretty combat heavy so far and I'm just more of a slice of life reader so take that with a grain of salt :]]

GRACE >> hey silver head ... what r u doin sittin on the floor its totally disgraceful?? y dont u sit on a couch big bro.

Note : This update is here today for me to vent my anger. That's why it is regrettably short....

greater strength reinforcement

"Of course." He said in the dialect.

Pulling the blade out of its wooden sheath, it almost blinded me from how reflective it was

"Oh yes. My name is Lou Ming. It's nice to meet you too. " said the boy.

"So, how could you get one?" —Zeux