I turned around just as the last book went back to the shelf and walked to the sofa to lay down. The stress of having a rebellious successor can take down even hero, huh.
The author is hard working and put a lot of effort into her book which is really interesting. What I dislike about the Novel is about the writing clarity.Like this scene. "do not forget I your father!" said her father.I think describing the father would work on such a scene
I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?
I practice the Dao of Shamelessness!You'll see how cultured I really am when you read this novel. Why don't you tip maids too? Maids are special, you know?They clean your clothes, cook dishes, and especially do night services! Crazy, right!?
