The Emperor's Vow - Reviews

*****

"What's up with you, why didn't you come out for dinner. Your dad is looking for you." Mrs. Morales started.

Francis's eyes loses its dark tint, he quickly rushes at the floor of the fatty and opens the bag. Bottles of glass fall out, labeled with 'Holy Water'. Francis takes off the cork and downs the holy water. The demon distorted screeches are echoed throughout the station, as the demon leaves Francis's body. Burn marks all over it's body.

The front of the gate itself was shaped like the entrance to a mausoleum, with a square body and triangular roof. Several turquoise gems glowed in between the marble pillars beside the entrance, along with a single well cut one directly above the entrance.

Loved it, there were a few typos but nothing that really broke the story or its emotions that it invokes.Lots of moments where i was genuinely immersed in the story. Good characters, good story, the world itself could be more fleshed out but other than that it is amazing.Would have left a review sooner but WebNovel kept glitching out and wouldn't let me submit one. However that won't stop me. :)

This novel is a promising gem with great character development and an engaging storyline. The emotions the characters convey are beautifully written, making each scene deeply impactful. The world-building is solid, and the pacing of the updates keeps the readers hooked.While still early, the story has immense potential to grow into a masterpiece. Fans of the "extra" trope will find something refreshing here, and the steady improvement in quality with each chapter makes it a rewarding read, since the author listens to his readers. Definitely worth following for anyone who enjoys a blend of action, mystery, and heartfelt moments!

I am really enjoying this book and looking forward to see what's coming!

overall 4 stars from me!, it's been interesting story the world building and how the system works,  also as an exchange of the gifts there's consequences ... i like the consequences part!??keep going Author!