The Dream of a Reader - Reviews

"Ghost-hunting?!" She shouted, causing some nearby students to look at them.

Without any suspense the door broke as two dark figures walked in.

She groans, then says, "Yay me! Ouchouchouch."

[END]

°°This is about a young man code-name "ZN13" who changed the history of this unbeatable game with sheer confidence, hard work and well a little bit of luck.

1 hour later

Only shooting stars break the mold

"Thanks Az." I smirk. "Everyone, meet my brother, Ean." The room was silent for a moment , until Frisk, Asriel, and Paps bombarded me with questions.

I was me! This body, this mind, it was all mine, no one can take it from me.

I am so excited to see where this story takes us. It is so intriguing and I look forward to every chapter!

I have no words you write long chapters that all connecting stories the bits in the beginning are a little eh but otherwise the story is amazing it's about a cat

**"It’s been a while since I last read this, and it’s still just as amazing! The way the MC’s personality shifts based on the roles they take is a brilliant concept. But I was wondering—has the MC completely changed, or is there still a glimpse of his original self? A brief moment where his true personality shines through could make for a really powerful, heartwarming scene. Just a thought!I really love stories that explore deep character transformations like this—it’s one of the reasons I enjoy writing as well."**