ELeven new chapters has came out today hope you enjoy them spend a lot of time last night to write down and publish harder than you thing anyway have a good day.
Good book and good selection of characters. I am not a big fan of the systems novels but this... seems intriguing to me for some reasons... Keep up the work, Author!
The synopsis needs to be updated to help you get more readers.
The narration needs a little more polishing and you would be there. The plotline is cool. I am looking forward to this project.
You've successfully created a different reality, btw interesting one! The plot is captivating and characters are expressive, also descriptions of the backgroud are good, detailed. It looks from the beginnning that you already have a concept for the story as ALL!
So, I like your plot there! It is intriguing, the characters are entertaining too that makes it lively, which is a plus point. Overall, this story is a great one! Keep up the good work, Author!
I love reading your book! However, I couldn't quite understand the description of the characters, the background, and there were a few grammar problems as well. I suggest some proofreading and your book will be better! I'll be adding this book to my collection to see if you do better!
