The Demonic Cult has returned - Reviews

The Bible says that Lucifer got envy of humans that were favored by God and then was outcasted from heaven.

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XiaYi didn't like this answer, he observed her from afar. Even well she was eating she was unusually quite and even looked depressed. She didn't even eat much, which was saying something since MingLi was a foodie. He somehow felt it was his fault and felt extremely guilty.

'She's so nice.'

"Yes sir" Tim said as the monitor actually made a ping like sound and us now showing an exclamation mark, "Am I thinking what you will do that I think you will going to do sir?"

"I intended to say that Prince Yong should practice himself more and this was the only way I could learn coal drawing back then...I was not learning from master but from my mistakes in practice...! And as a learned personal of paintings, Prince Yong must be aware of all this...!!" her throat got dry at the end to hear him say, get of my sight or something similar... she closed her eyes!!

Hey everyone ! New novel out, give it a chance and also remember that the author is a novice, Thank you ?

i want more of this the story line so smooth

I really like the story but update is slow

I like the story. The issue I'm having is that The author is repeating themselves over and over again by writing the same thing in different ways. There are entire chapters that are written about something that would take maybe a paragraph. Half the time you can read the first paragraph and then skim the entire rest of the chapter and still understand very clearly what happened. Other than that, I like the idea of the story. I like the writing of the story, but too much expounding on things that don't matter much.

Hello. I'm the author and i want to drop a review on my book. so this is my first book ever . There might be problems but I'm trying to become better. I think the quality of my chapters are still improving . let's see where it goes

This is an amazing original piece of work, and being able to read it in real time is great, especially since the author dialogs with all your posts. They take your criticism and fix any mistakes you may point out but will remain firm in the vision for the story. I also like the recent name  change from "my draconic pet system" to what it is now. the previous title seemed very restricting to what pets the MC could get or somehow would turn them into dragon based pets. overall, it's a very good read with great pacing and world building only giving what you need at that moment, because of how big the universe is.  If the author makes other series eventually, I'd love to read