The debts of kings - Reviews

"hmmph. Thats a sign of maturity. You should believe in your son more... Then I'm going now to work too."

The man had gray eyes with the same color of short hair, and deep crows feet. A long beard hung down almost to his chest, and a large mace was tied to his belt. A flag bearing the empires mark was in his hand, the asterisk like symbol flowing through the wind.

"Who is it? I am busy right now." He said gruffly.

He laid beside me

It might be good but the references are annoying

Amazing novel but paywall at 15 makes me depressed and lonely

I'll be brutally honest in this review. The book is still relatively new and has potential so I'm not discouraging anyone from trying the book out. The book is a good read but a lot of factors are stopping me from rating it highly. We don't know what the world is like, little information has been provided. Writing feels like this is a machine translation, though the author's activeness suggests otherwise. Then the updating stability is plain bad. For a new book, at least a minimum of fifteen chapters should be stockpiled before the book is published. Releasing a chapter every 5-6 days is not a good move especially when readers haven't formed a connection with the book and so won't have the patience to wait it out.