The Deadly Game. - Reviews

[Refused.]

「T, that's wrong! Forget about that! I am a Knight. I'm a woman who lives by the sword. Such a case of romantic love.....」

        There was a gathering of thick dark cloud in the sky,everyone stared at the thick clouds with a shocked expression as a lightning bolt descended on the crippled Wang Su for defying the heavens.

"Got the tail!" (???)

Korra: ~Yes!Yes!Here!~

"Bar girls aren't as quick to get drunk as club girls, they don't have the need to have an excuse to dance like strippers on guys they don't know,"

story gets better as you go on, liking it more and more

it got me hooked, (gosh, my brain is not braining) your book is easy to read, easy to follow, i mean, there's no need to criticize, and to be frank, more people will like this and it's not confusing. I love the writing style, so please, continue writing! more and more readers to come!