The Day She Got Married, The Crazy Young General Cried His Eyes Red. - Reviews

  As the light appeared in front of Yan Jun and Xin Wu, The light expanded and turned into a lady that looks like in her prime with green hair and, was wearing a dress made up of spider webs "Please don't scold him…It's not his fault…It's mine" she said with the most gentle voice as she floats down on the floor

"bener atuh neng jes, katanya reni dari anak kelas 2-B nampak hantunya, bahkan sempat difoto dia"

"What's the meaning of this?" Danish asked. He was the one who always maintained his composure and kept his calm. He could see that the priest was ready to fight back even after knowing they were heavily outnumbered.

He leaned down and I closed my eyes expecting for his lips to find mine but instead I felt a rag being being dragged across my cheek. I opened my eyes and he gave me a soft smile as he continued to wash my face. I wanted to smack myself for momentarily forgetting that I had my father's ashes covering me. That I had felt as if I was going to die chocking on them. "Am I so pitiful?" I said trying to lighten the dour mood but there was no humor in my voice.

"Remember, he has to go back to the magic academy as soon as possible or all of this would have been for nothing"

''?'' Big brother is looking at me a bit strangely, he may be embarrassed.

My world's on fire, how about yours?

"So, are you Senshi Arako, the Beginner level of Class Pearl Camellia?" He asked, and i realized he was the one who called me inside . I nodded. He then proceed to read my achievements , both academic and non-academic, and my deeds bearing the school name ( First place on Language Competition and second place at Instrument Mastery Competition, both held at the neighboring cities ). The Instructors and Deans whispered each other, while eyeing me. At last, the Elders nodded.

It’s a interesting concept poor execution. The blatant constant mention of skin color is very 1800s. Maybe I’d read another of your books but idk

Pleasure is a interesting thing to explore ...

So I read the first few chapters and I shall say that they are well written,lengthy and updates are stable as well. No complaints as the story line seems very interesting as well.

Let me have the honor of being the first to review it! ??Oh, the beginning was a cliffhanger on its own. The female lead is relatable and quite interesting to read; she’s truly unique. But that tutor—let me skin him alive! Son of a—he’s lucky he’s a fictional character and that I can’t find him! ?The plot takes a unique approach, but I don’t expect anything less from this amazing author. I can’t wait to see this book succeed. More chapters, please, author! ?