The Dawn of the New World - Reviews

It's a great story and the world building is amazing.

My problem is:

1.
There is so much things happening at the same time. Seems Like the mc will never get good rest... he is always in danger.. It feels a bit stressful even for the reader.

2.
Suddendly the mc is jumped from the 1st to 9th stage and the only struggle is THe breakthrough in major realms.. and that's ok but you ShoUld'Ve focused more at the progress between minor stages.

Review made at chapter 240

*Review copied from old version of this novel*

Absolutely loving the build up and background. The characters are cool and the directions the story is going, so far, feels right. Keep up the awesome work. The New World is exciting. Wish it was for real. Lol. Can't wait for more stuff soon.

Im going to be honest, started out great... 300 chapters in... well lets just say Im done... too many unused Ideas just thrown in there for filler... and they don't go anywhere... I really liked it at first, maybe some work and this would be amazing...

Look at me, I'm the captain now!
I might not look like it, but I love crabs. And for that, i will do whatever is necessary to get what I want.

*Review copied from previous version of this Novel*

Don't know if I have reviewed this before but I am just gonna do it. Very well written. Interesting. The frequency of chapters is awesome and very constant since the writer started it.


*Update*
I am about 250 chapters in and I can say this without a doubt that I have yet to read a more riveting, interesting, comprehensive and addicting novel. Keep up the awesome work writer.

Hi fellow Dao practitioners! If you are wondering if this novel is worth your time I proudly say that it's definitely worth it, I read all chapters up until 350.
 It's really well righten and the character development makes sense. Unfortunately, I'm quitting it because I don't have the money to continue.
If you are the author reading this, I would like to say that your work its definitely worth the top 10 of this app, the only thing it need to make it there is popularity.