The Crimson General’s Second Life - Reviews

"Maybe, she went back" James said.

A gentle stream was flowing like it normally was, but something was off about this stream, it contained the normal type of Pokémon, Magikarp, but there was a difference in one of them... It seemed to glow a bright yellow at the bottom of the shallow stream.

You'll never shine if you don't glow

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

Loved the new chapter's, the summary and to do list finally getting a bit different, do you actually have exams tmr which is why you left that in??    Yeah still enjoying the story, the 4th one kinda even got my heart racing. But i wonder is mira and the other one(sorry im bad at remembering names) the only ones alive? Or they are the only ones showing it? with what ch-5 told us it seems all of them are alive... But trying there best to act... Or maybe they are not free yet, from the code maybe? Maybe im just looking too deep into it...Anyways good work ch-5 felt a bit rushed but still added alot,like more characters might be alive, was the rush cuz of you exams?Well anyways thanks for such great content really appriciate it.