The Chronicles of Lumora: The Shard of Eternity - Reviews

The character design and the frequent updates are a definitely good and the way he built the background for the world was good as well, the names are definitely better than what I've seen in most novels.

it was a good book and I enjoyed reading it

After reading everything I would say that it isn't the worst thing I've ever read but not the greatest either. I say give it try and you may enjoy it and stay to read the rest.●●□Author I still waiting for the good stuff to happen if you know what I mean.

Another stinging smack came down on his other buttcheek and Akihito cried out in both pain and surprise. Asami didn't relent and the omega tried to protect his behind by using his hands to cover it. Unfortunately for him, Asami saw it coming and instead of pulling them away, the alpha growled in disapproval. The growl was new to Akihito. His omega quickly whimpered and before he knew it, those hands were lowered. He didn't want his alpha to be disappointed in him and the instincts were so strong that Akihito cried.

Mo yang looks at the distant school and thinks to himself I'm going to become strong. He starts walking towards it and sees all the other kids giving him all looks of disgust and pity so he put his hands in his pockets and starts walking towards the other kids he looks at them with a gleeful look in his eyes and said hey guys I know im handsome but do you guys have to be this jealous of my  looks. They look at him tell him to shut up and get to the back of the line before we beat you up again. He just laughs and walks to the back of the line then in the distance all you hear is a kid rumbling through the distance waving his hands and yelling Mo yang. Mo yang turns around and starts waving back Feng Yu you finally showed up. He laughs and says I've had a big breakfast and I forgot how long the distance it was from here to my house. Feng Yu looks around 14 years old at how big he looks but is actually 10 years old just like him but he's around 200 pounds. Feng Yu looks at the other children and said were they bullying you again and he just laughs and says no they were just  admiring my looks. Feng Yu looks at him and says when I get stronger I'll just sit on them Mo Yang just laughs and shakes his head then in the distance they see a kid with 2 guards by his side. Mo yang looks at the kid while gritting his teeth Meng Lu.

He didn't expect this boy to be around when he killed his third man to join Olympus. He personally had no issues making a child his fourth victim.

but my tale was all about the dark

I quickly bolted up to a sitting position, raising my trembling arm and then gave it a quick sniff.

P.S.

An hour or so had passed since the Gremory train had stopped at the Sitri terminal, Issei and Gohan had finally managed to regain their senses after Rias's secret weapon. Issei was now sat with Gasper playing games with him as Asia sat next to him, Rias had gone to speak to Azazel so Akeno was sat cuddling up to Gohan while Xenovia sat near them as did Koneko who continued to look out the window and not seem her usual self.

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