THE CHOOSEN ONES - Reviews

once we turned

Lin Long Tian noticed after glancing more at these three girls, that their internal injuries were at a higher level than their external injuries which was getting to an exceedingly high level and if was not treated carefully could leave a scar on them when cultivating.

Only shooting stars

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

wsg gang. Author here. First I'd like to say, I'm not an author. I'm a programmer. Currently working on making it big in the industry, you know the usual stuff. Life is pretty boring and stressful my mans, it really is. I'm also quite lonely. I moved from my home place to a place incredibly far away a few years ago, and life has never been the same man... No friends, no interest in social occasions, it's all freakin garbage.I used to really like writing stories when I was a kid, so I thought I could give it a try again to take the stress off, and so I did! This story is the result. I dunno if people will like it or not, but I don't really care lol. Have fun and remember, we'll all make it in our lives bros, don't worry.one thing tho, if I see one more comment like, "can there be sm*t

its decent but u can tell it was written by an amateur the first 10 chapters were ok but his family felt inhumane in a way ur son just woke up from a hospital and u just left.... and u could tell it copied from tapov and the dream he had about the future was like tapov too and felt misplaced if u are tryna build suspense and act mysterious dont give so much info in one dream in the first 20 chapters the fights were insanely fast but in the physical assesment they were long ash and boring i guess every character seems so fake like ren he got close to the mc so fast its insane add some realism to these interactions also it has so much useless monolouge it completely ruins any fight that gets u excited

shameless author here adding a review on my own book ? enjoy im new to writing so if you some problem you can point it out that can help me and also if you want to add a talent and new character feel free to comment

You, my dear, are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors! Can't wait to read all the upcoming chapters. In the meantime, I quickly previewed some of your other novels listed here and am struggling with which one to delve into next. They all seem so intriguing! Please never stop writing! ??