THE BODY GUARD'S SECRET - Reviews

Leo: "System, Show me my status."

Lin Xu took out the fries and started dangling them, only to find his fries breaking down.

"Unless you'd prefer to be beheaded at my mother's command, I suggest you follow your new orders." He growled.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

"What!? Oh no Doc, alright, actually there is someone who whispers me to do all this."

Really good book Fights are great and lemons are great also And good plot ? would recommend

At first glance i liked the book and added it to my reading list but then the more i read it, i found multiple grammatical errors and some of the paragraphs don't even make sense AT ALL. And some of the things the female lead actor does or says are complete falacy like she knows she's a werewolf but denies it? i mean hatred is one thing but denial of existence is something else nd she changes schools and promises to avoid attention even using wigs but then she's asking for a party invite, talking back to a bully and even the school's bitches, dressing to impress, wanting to make friends with popular students, etcetra.... is a bit contradicting for me and i suggest the author to go back and make an edition.

The stories progressing alright as far as I've seen, and I'm excited to see where it goes but I feel like there should be more character development. The novel also seems a bit fast paced without any time for me to fully immerse myself into the scene. Other than that it's ok for it being your first published work.

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