It's ROTK fanfic so I raised my hopes high. And actually, author seems to know his craft. What just irked me is the weird formatting of the story. Wrong punctuations and capitalization all over the story made it hard for me to focus on the plot. I don't care about wrong grammar or spelling, my brain is already too used to mtling Chinese stories so I don't have problems with wrong grammar/spelling. As long as I can understand the meaning, it's all okay. But in this novel, my problem is different. I always got distracted by the weird formatting. I'm not sure if that is part of author's style, but whenever I want to get immersed in the story but noticed so many distractions midway, I feel like murdering people. The feeling intensified the more I read the next chapters and see that the formatting is still the same.