The Birth Of the Massacre Sovereign in the Mana Era - Reviews

So that's it! Thanks a lot and see yaaaah~

I need to get myself away from this place

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

"What do you mean she won't take a name that isn't by her choice it's yours and its a real name as well does that mean she has one already and if so what does that mean." He was confused while reincarnated beings aren't unheard of, but the gods tend to keep them in free or in high positions to give them options that would best suit them down the road. Which would mean what exactly?

Although lawless didn't understand why Sora was so surprised, he explained: "Three days ago, when Ace went out to sea, Luffy went to send him. When he came back, he found you."

He placed his lips on mine and push me down on the bed... And before I knew it Without any warning his large and hard member was inside me.

Great story, i love history so this story very much connects with my interests and hobbies.

i think it is pretty good you should tryreading it

I'll just skip the positive and get to the point.There point in the plot that are repetitive which could get quite boring, it's like some of the chapters have half of its contents, give or take, basically describing the same thing over and over again. Fight scenes are also not very descriptive imo.Some phrases are also over used like pinching the bridge of the nose or rubbing the temple.As for the male, while amusing, can sometimes be cringey and annoying. I feel like there's no development with his personality. But perhaps that's point to highlight his mischievous nature. But to me it just gets tiring; it was fun at the start. I would to see him get serious more often.

so far, you know how to make a captivating story that just wants to draw me in more and more,

nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it