The Birth Of A Trickster - Reviews

Phoebe swiftly ran out to do the test, Lachlan waited for ten minutes patiently before Phoebe walked back in, her forehead covered in sweat. "Oh boy, you didn't tell me the gravity went so high in that test. Fortunately, I used my gravity stone and nullified it, somehow it counted me passing with flying colours even though I cheated."

"Hey what ya doing Jun?" Said Ryouske "Huh? Why even ask? I'm getting ready to play the first VRMMO." Said Jun "Oh? Can I play to?!" Ryouske jumped up excited. "Uh yeah sure there's another helmet right here." Jun was astonished for he thought Ryouske didn't like gaming. "Let's star the game!" "Full Drive" They both said in unison.

Interesting story with a kinda interesting setting. Hope this one doesn't also get abandoned due to the harassment and bullying by the pathetic self-inserting insecure cucks.Only advice to the author is to write what he wants to because you are not going to satisfy everyone, so might as well stay true to yourself. GLHF.

I am a Harry Potter Enthusiast, so due to interest, I have searched fan-fictions related to Harry Potter.And came across this one.After reading this, I found the start of this fan fiction very interesting and I hope more chapters come soon!

It’s a fine story that takes its time to build itself up. The story starts off slow and some people may not like that, but if you would just give it some time you’ll see how good the story can be.