the Author is just......the way suffering and sorrow is portrayed, it's unusual.and the Protag doesn't really know much in the way of happiness and unhappiness, too.her innocence has tugged on my heartstrings!few suggestions would be: 1st, hurry and kill Jules.2nd, i suggest you put some attention to spellings; because of the nice flow of story, it can be understood, either way, what you mean. but it has the potential to disrupt reading flow, too.it's a nice read, trust me. I wonder what more the Author have in-store.
