The Billionaire's Dilemma - Reviews

"nope" Lucy replies simply

"I can imagine"

Using her hesitating state to his advantage, Conan force jumps a third time, this time he successfully gets a grip on the woman. The moment his hand makes contact with her skin, he instantly invades her mind.

The red-eyed genjutsu mistress just sighed. She could already see exactly what Kiba needed to change: his entire attitude. That kind of alpha mentality straight from the Inuzuka clan never worked well for a team, especially when Kiba wasn't the top dog by a long way. I'm the sensei, Kiba, not you, Kurenai rebuked mentally.

[INT+4]

"I'm sorry! I didn't see you."

I looked at him, undecided if he was joking, or drunk, or crazy.  "I thought you said there is no Marie?"

When Shi Jieyi heard Lin Tianlong repeat the indecent words she had spoken before while he pounded her in such a way, her face flushed with anger. Although it was true that she said them, she felt very bashful when she got teased by this little lover of hers. Her cheeks blushed har, and her eyes turned misty.

this story is interesting and lovely I love

It is a nice story for a first timer! It was a little boring during the first and your suspense writing can be improved but keep growing ? I believe in you and very soon many will.....BTW can't wait for the second chapter ?

It's good I just hope it's actually finished.

Ummm, What Can I Say, What A Wonderful story ❤❤