The Beta's Forbidden Obsession - Reviews

Only shooting stars break the mold

(Shieek!!)(Shiieek!!)

I love the story especially chapter 1. it's crazy how no one has actually given this a book a chance. it's got potential.

loving the story so far. The premise is amazing, but i feel a hint of something missing like lore or mysteriousness or something. A short complaint, i feel like he gets handed things down whenever he needs like clothes, food and he even unlocked his darkness power, how he got it? no idea. He got a thicc plot armor. over all its pretty enjoyable. Looking forward to more chapters ?

not bad for a new writerone of the hero name i like it

The story has a great foundation. I'd like to read more about this story. Although there are still room for improvements, but overall it was a great book.

Damn it, Ash! I've been trying to get some reviews on my book, and I leave you alone for three days, and you already have like 9 people in your review section. *Sigh*.